Studio/ Research : BVA 316 - 06/06/2019 (Comment on Illustration)
Week 14: One-on-One Meeting with Kathryn
Review on illustration: The focus on this illustration is actually Cinderella herself. Being the domestic maid, obviously showing shes the servant, serving her stepmother and stepsister. What should be improve is that the scene, it needs to identify that its a scene showing she's doing house chores.
For Kathryn, this illustration shows more of a magical scene.
I should focus more on drawing rather than colours.
Essay: write the rough draftand really work on it.
Review on illustration: The focus on this illustration is actually Cinderella herself. Being the domestic maid, obviously showing shes the servant, serving her stepmother and stepsister. What should be improve is that the scene, it needs to identify that its a scene showing she's doing house chores.
For Kathryn, this illustration shows more of a magical scene.
I should focus more on drawing rather than colours.
Essay: write the rough draftand really work on it.
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