Art History: BVA 312 - 09/10/2019 (Result for Art History's Essay)

BVA312 Assessment 2, Essay #1, Marking ScheduleStudent: Quan Tan Tutor: Traci Meek

Introduction 15/25 Subject and linked question clearly identified Examples of art movement identified with issues and contexts Theories or judgments by resources should be present and APA referenced	Primitivism and Modern Art. What relationships can we find? Y Y
Body of Esssay 18/25 Art movement examples described relative to contexts Functions and values of art movement described Issues arising from previous point identified Theories or judgments by resources should be present and APA referenced	2138 words All requirements for this section were met but it was very hard to follow your thoughts. I suggest you use Studiosity, offered by SIT, to help you organize your ideas.
Conclusion 12/25 Key points identified in body of essay summarised Summary may take the form of a reasoned analysis whichaddresses questions ‘what’, ‘who’, ‘where’, ‘when’, ‘how come’, and ‘why this or that interpretation’.	N N A summary needs to restate the body of the essay. 50 words is far too brief to do that.
APA Referencing 8.4 /15 Full reference list provided in APA format Evidence of well-researched material Spelling and grammar	Y- excellent APA Y N- You need to use a proofreader to help catch grammar mistakes
Blog 9.6 /10 Notes on topics covered in class with personal annotations Photos, scans, or screen grabs to support your annotation Updates on assessments APA references	22 entries! Shows essay development, notes and analysis of class work, good pictures, and great references Excellent!
63/100	Worth 40% of BVA312

I need to work in improving the flow of the essay. 

* proof reading and studiosity needed. 

** get an A if possible. 🙏🏻